Wednesday, January 11, 2012

cadillac don dictionaryIs this a good short story ?

Fuel Issue

It was a scorching hot sunny day on the northern hills of Palermo, Italy. Uncle Fernando had just finished packing our luggage. We were five minutes away from leaving to the airport when my maddening sister Jessica started to irritate us. It was her daily routine to annoy us with her temper tantrums; although she was sometimes cuddly as a cactus. “where is my jacket? The red sparkly one!”My sister franticly yelled through her clenched teeth “Pablo where did you put it? I know you took it!” “I don’t know it”, I don’t even know what you are talking about” I screamed back agitatedly.
For some reason I was always blamed for all the miss happenings in the family. It was probably because I was being a typical nine year old kid. I did not comprehend the idea to listen to my parents. I was supposed to behave and listen to my tio, but as usual I didn’t. This particular day, I was the most preferable person to blame.
After my sister’s tantrum delay we were on our way to the airport, we were going home. It was here were my stupid decisions started to go erroneous, event after event things started to come toppling down. On the trip to Italy I was the person in charge of carrying the Italian to English dictionary so Uncle Fernando could interpret anything he couldn’t understand (mostly everything) but that day I had packed tcadillac don dictionaryhe dictionary in with my other stuff. I was too slothful to go and get it from the back of the car when I was supposed to; it was deeply imbedded between clothing, libros, video games and my football topping it all.


The fuel on the car we had rented for our tour through the mountains was running low, uncle Fernando had to rapidly reach an estacion de gasolina to refuel before we reached the airport. We finally reached the place with our 1986 Cimarron Cadillac that was fast as a snail; my uncle asked me from cash register “Papi look this up, gasolio and abituale gas” “what do I use for the fuel? Quick we ain’t got no time!” umm… I softly stuttered from behind the car, gasolio? “Yeah that’s right it says it right here” “aha use that!” I yelled without a clue that I had just triggered an action to the unfortunate series of events that would come later on that would haunt me for the rest of that summer.
We had finally left the gas station with a filled tank. I knew I had messed up badly but I couldn’t tell uncle Fernando that I had told him to fill the car with the fuel that was probably not even the right, I knew he would be mad as an avispa; I tried to get my mind on other thoughts while I sat tight on the back of the car hoping that the fuel I had chosen was the correct one. My stomach felt largely uneasy when PAHF! The car’s tcadillac don dictionaryires loudly screeched my uncle swiftly curved the automobile away from the incoming cars. The car came abruptly came to a halt. “ya’ll okay” uncle Fernando cried loudly. We were all fine; we sat there quiet for a few seconds baffled wondering what had happened, but inside I knew it was my entire fault .I had almost unwillingly destroyed my family and had completely spoiled our trip.



We were stranded in the middle of nowhere late for our flight; under the hot summer sun, the carro’s cooling didn’t work and it was dry as dust inside the Cadillac. I think we knew then whose fault it was, but for some motive no one pointed fingers but instead under the midst of chaos we all came together as one a worked mutually. Even my hardheaded sister cooperated quietly as a mouse by making calls to the airport car company and a taxi. Within a couple of minutes another flight back to L.A had been arranged, and the car was on the way to the car shop. That was an unforgettable summer were I learned a valuable lesson, responsibility.
This is an interesting story. My only suggestion would be to change the story name to something that reflects the lesson learned. Maybe something like "Fueling Responsibility" or something like that.
ddint read it but it seems long enough to be good
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…

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